I have a backlog of pages to write about, and I don’t have any new Famouses for you yet, sorry, so hear goes.
I think this is a cool silent page. It was pretty easy to make, and sets a nice ominous tone for the action to come.
There are a couple things going on here. First, the way this page was written is that it is almost a continuous tracking shot following Redemption as he looks for the source of the sound. I made it a little bit longer than was written, but not too much.
I liked the idea of the “camera” starting in close and falling back further with each panel. I also really like the way the rooms and hallways turned out. What a crappy building! This place is pretty epic in it’s scope and condition. Almost an unreal setting.
These are all based on photos of actual places though. Not all from the same building, or from Detroit, but that’s the artistic freedom you get when making something like this.
I don’t really have much else to say about it. It’s a simple little page, but I think an effective one.